The only issue I notice is towards the end to the farthest left. A few purple pixels seem to pop in for a visit.
What I like most about this is that it doesn't give away anything major about the story line of the comic at all; but it instead shows character interaction as well as personality. It helps future viewers to get a sense for the characters to come and develop that relationship in their mind and hearts/ attachment to the characters for when the comic comes to be. You gave movement to minor things such as lip twitching and her hair twitching as well; giving more personality to the character over all. Not to mention the animation is well done. Fantastic work as expected
What can I say the animation is so fluid. Its so nice. The only problem is a small glitch on the Kao side near the end with the odd colors. This is one of your best animations yet. I'm so proud of you I just wanna see you keep this up.
Pretty soon you're gonna be doing little animated shorts about a few minutes long. Soon you're gonna be making short cartoons and more. Just imagine how far you can go. This animation is your best yet. Its so smooth and fluid. Just the right amount of frames.
I love how Jack makes that hand sign near the end. It has so much personality and flare.
Oh god the animation is so good on this. -is so proud of you owo- Omg Ali you're getting so good D8. Pretty soon you can do more complicated ones keep it up alipaws. I wanna see you do a nother one after this. It just wow it just blew me the fuck away D8.
What I like most about this is that it doesn't give away anything major about the story line of the comic at all; but it instead shows character interaction as well as personality. It helps future viewers to get a sense for the characters to come and develop that relationship in their mind and hearts/ attachment to the characters for when the comic comes to be. You gave movement to minor things such as lip twitching and her hair twitching as well; giving more personality to the character over all. Not to mention the animation is well done. Fantastic work as expected
Pretty soon you're gonna be doing little animated shorts about a few minutes long. Soon you're gonna be making short cartoons and more. Just imagine how far you can go. This animation is your best yet. Its so smooth and fluid. Just the right amount of frames.
I love how Jack makes that hand sign near the end. It has so much personality and flare.
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